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Wednesday, June 10, 2020
Tim the turtle
Hi, and welcome to my blog. This week in writing my goal was: Confidently shape ideas for effect and use some complex sentences to create pace, flow and interest. My create task was to use my narrative writing from last week, and then make it better by adding in different language features, complex sentences, a good structure, and better vocab. Here is my intro to my story that I made better:
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